We are learning to upload a quality blog post.
This is my work that I did today with Whaea Donna was in our classroom. I enjoyed doing . Our task was to listen to a video and write down as much information as we could about how to write a quality blog comment. Then we had to create a poster on google drawing of what we had learnt. and it was really fun.
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ReplyDeleteHi Seth, awesome job at trying your best at your blog post and poster. You could reword some of your statements to something more positive. For example, instead of writing 'don't write nasti comments', you could of said 'use positive language'. Remember to add capital letters and a question at the end of your blog post.
ReplyDeleteZao chen Seth.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the background that you have chosen in your Google drawing.
I learnt that it is not nice being mean to others and always respect them.
Maybe you could change the font for people to read better like Russo one and
Comic Sans MS
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Hey Seth, I'm Aarya from Waikowhai Primary School. I thought your blog post is a good way to teach other kids write positive comments. This made me feel interested in your blog post because you are teaching people to write positive comments. Maybe next time you could reread your blog post before you post it to check for errors. Maybe you can tell us a bit more about how to write a positive comments. Your work is interesting to read. Feel free to read my blog posts. Blog you later!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Seth I really like your blog post. next time try to add a bit more. And add a question but it's really good
ReplyDeleteKia ora Seth.
ReplyDeleteI like your poster because it is really light coloured. I think you could add more to your description and you could also try put in a reflection. But you did a great job.
hi Seth amazing job on your blog post. Lots of color that's what I like to see but the last part with the big letters just make them small next time
ReplyDeleteKia ora Seth,
ReplyDeleteI really liked you post, just pointing out that on your poster it has a couple common spelling mistakes, other than that I really liked the colours you used on our poster, I also enjoyed your reflection. Kakete.